When I see her piece, it reminds me of my family in Japan. As an international student, I sometimes become homesick and think about family living other side of the world.
Some suggestion about this piece...
- Opening scene
So, it starts with kinda sad/scary mood about this village and then it goes to her family. So, I wondered how she want to do the theme of this piece.
More traditional documentary way or more experimental way.
- Title
I noticed that she haven't decided the title yet and I think it is very important for this piece. It gives audience different atmosphere depends on which name she decide. Probably start thinking with what is the main theme of this piece. House? Family? or Village itself?
Thank you, Tetsuya. Yes, I need to think about a title for the piece, it is always hard to get a title....For the opening part, the whole piece is going to be a mixed style, maybe more experimental but also will have other elements, so it may look a little bit strange by now. For now I have no idea how these different materials and contents are gonna to be mixed, I think that will be the main problem I need to address in the next stage.
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